Recent content by 0bserv

i'm glad the cringe is universally aknowledged. Ok why the fuck is he killing the big boss on his first encounter? Then why the fuck such good premises are ruined by such bad writings ? just wtf all over. A garbage story stinks that much more when it had potential.

ayo....this writing. pisses me off. sad.

sad. it has a lot of potential, but i keep being disapointed by the writing. this could have been slightly harsher with a more realistic twist. it would have been perfect.

dudes, three years old dont have this kind of vocabulary but ok ^^ Five maybe.

Legendary German Souplex right there.

The joking commentaries kind of put me off. I love the pressure of the dark atmosphere, try not ruining it too much <3. though the mum joke was fun.

dude no spoilers ffs ^^

Lot of typo's. but thx for picking it up. <3

So much testosterone. I just feel like growing a pair.

The only fucking dude with a real smile.

That's a lot.

I appreciate how simply it comes out. without a warning, it always loomed, and suddenly it's there.

<3

dude, those words from the child.

it started somewhat all cute with the grandpa, and now we're going full deep into cold hearted behavior. love it. strong. i hope he doesnt go mental like those other novels where the mc is just a trash hunting down trashes.