Nah, translation is fine. You at least bothered to make it make some sense in English unlike a depressing ammount of translators that actually do understand Japanese.
What was a blight on God's green earth :P was that vertically stacked text on page 3. It might work for Japanese, but it was a...
I know this is terrible of me:
Air force: "Oh nooooo. Not our shooooes!"
Meanwhile 300km from there some Svetlana is knee deep in a compound that is 50% mud and 50% guts, while suffering inflamationg due to her issues, hauling a man twice her weight in his full kit, under enemy fire.
Svetlana...
@nuttydesu Coccolia most likely given that she would have the data and techniques needed to clone Joyce Welt (remember those perverts from pre game manga arcs) and also as shown in PHO doesn't care much about him.
@FallenAngel You are better off NOT knowing the Anime. It's garbage.
Though given that the manga has been skipping the other side (classmate side) I have no idea how well will the next bit go.
> Wait, ain't all-girls school is supposed to be a den of lesbians or something
Lesbians, if it's CGDCT, and menflesh starved heteros undergoing a nuclear attack of hormones (not to say bois aren't under same).
They have introduced the school uniform for Tsukasa in one of previous chapters...