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His name is Rize right? On page 15 it's misspelled as "Lize" then

p15 "we probably aren't even strong enough to beat against him" <- should be go or stand or something else instead of beat

Lots of talk about vague scythe wielding girl, but nothing about the generic "battle card" booster packs with a pigtails character on them, or what may or may not be a one punch man reference on that tank

I expected the jar on page 12 to contain a qr code... I guess I'm traumatized by discord invites

This chapter really needs some proofreading...

p9 "flexibleness"? flexibility The redrawing is also a bit … off? Seems like something a computer would come up with, instead of what a humand would redraw, especially the parts that are just straight lines on a white background yet somehow end up distorted.

The "I'm harmless" line is repeated?

Cravat and tie? Isn't the cravat the referred tie?

missing a w on 20

Blood's being censored now? Also, "puppet of prist Boris"

On page 6, "I did made" should be "I did make".

Not humid, the opposite

The cafe on the 17th floor, the cafe on the 16th floor, which one is it?

So he released the shiny male combee because he was looking for a female one

Isn't the sister the one who ran away from home?