@TimDNchantr I mean he's kinda got a point. Although I don't really care because if I like something that someone else doesn't then who tf cares, and also even if a manga is critically bad people are still allowed to enjoy it. For example, the genderbending/yuri was kinda out of place and...
So glad I came across this gem early. Your art is great and seems to keep improving. The story so far is intriguing and has a lot of potential. I love the world that is being built. Everything about it is wonderful, and I can't wait for this second Chapter 1 soon!