Thank you for the chapter! Everything looks good to me. I'm no translator myself but a friend of mine is and he's told me that many meanings don't have an exact translation so it's better to get as close as you can and make it read good. Hope that helps!
I really want to love this manga. But why are they 7? Why all the fan service with 7 year olds? This story would have worked just as good with teenagers or preferably over 18 with all the fan service...