This was good and very entertaining but I wish that the relationship between the two got to develop more. The ending feels kind of undeserved but that's to be expected out of something so short. Would recommend for a good time tho
This was such a fantastic story almost the whole way through... The ending actually ruins it though. Honestly one of the worst endings of anything I've ever read and it ruins the rest of the story for me.
The art for this is wonderful and its almost worth reading for that alone but the story is sloppy. While I did enjoy it for the most part of felt very rushed at the end due to speeding through the confessions of the two main couples. I feel the story would have been better if the two couples had...