Please, ask for someone with great english skills to proofread this before publishing it. So many glaring mistakes made it through in the last 10 chapters...
What is the maiden's duty exactly? Getting eaten by the dragon? They keep talking about that and I don't remember it being explained. Wouldn't bullying the bride of the water dragon be a terrible idea?
The parts in the brothel are so cringe. Why did the guy even need to pilot Alma for this? It's not even sexy because the MC ruins every scene by being a dumbass.
So, if he is the End, entropy personified, is there a Beginning? Is there an opposite to him or did he just allow the universe to form since he was bored?
These guys are idiots. They both have no info on their missing friend, so just say it. It's not like they have any lead. I'm pretty certain the other guy was giving a beta copy of the game too.
The knight and chamberlain are very sus. An oath breaking knight should not be trusted. The old man looks like a cliche evil vizier, might be a red herring as it's a little too obvious.
Did he really have to be in the driver seat for this? Can't Alma stay in control? He's gonna be awful at this. Also, this really kills my excitement. Guy in female body getting fucked by a futa, that's too out there for me.
@Granitefish It's obvious she gave them that quest so they could keep the sword. She was trying to help them grow. But since they are too dense to notice, she decided to go along with their charade.