This is a great direction to take things — I hope the potion shenanigans were just to set up the plot and now we have a protagonist in denial about forcing her way into a lesbian harem.
I also like the potential drama coming from the fact that the girls don’t know they were drugged and yet...
Nice to see this picked up! Aside from the really cool artstyle, I appreciate the fact that the creepy stalker is actually depicted as abusive and not just fetishized.
I like the idea of the whole secret thing, but choosing to have her come clean about her “main gimmick” so soon to him is certainly strange...I think it made sense plot-wise since she wanted to explain to him why he should stop asking so many questions.
I like the knight, but so far he’s clearly...
Yeah, there’s a lot of room for expanding in this — as it stands it remains as a reminder that “bum learning responsibility from a little girl” is a captivating story.
(Reposting now that this version exists)
A meek ending for a fairly meek story, even with the central premise being very heavy, the way it was written makes it come off as just childish...especially once it’s obvious the author can’t make drama in a way that feels organic.
It didn’t need to...
A meek ending for a fairly meek story, even with the central premise being very heavy, the way it was written makes it come off as just childish...especially once it’s obvious the author can’t make drama in a way that feels organic.
It didn’t need to involve every other character having...
Yeah, the story does have a major flaw where characters are seemingly defined by their internal drama instead of anything else...but it’s still an interesting main premise even if the stakes seem all over the place.
While empathizing with the abuser isn’t really a healthy way of going about this...I can give it a pass since this isa drama with naturally disappearing police officers.