I think I have misunderstood something here. I thought Jareds territory wasn't part of the kingdom and he even refused to become part of it when offered. So how can the kingdom grant another country's lord the title of a duke?
@serendipityave No, you dont need to tone it down. Not all of us are native english speakers, so it really helped understand the context more. Keep up the good work!
I dont think it's the same from whimsubs. I noticed some grammar errors that aren't in the whimsubs translation. For example page 25/26 has differences.
As a matter of fact, what @justforthelulz said would be better.
Like he said, some charts showing how people have rated the manga over time would show really well how the quality holds.
It would be even better if you could choose the timeline like "all time", "last year", "last month" and...
Like in the title, it would be great to see some stats in the manga page where it shows how many have dropped the manga. It could even show at what chapter people dropped it.
It would show if the quality have stayed good or declined.