@Sola To be honest I'm not surprised the translation was crap, I don't know a word of either Chinese nor Japanese and I just get by with google translate. If you can point out where it sounds like total rubbish it would help me greatly!
@abdude13 Yeah it seems that the raws I found were a Chinese translation, if those are the correct Japanese names I'll use those it the following chapters. Also were the raws you found online? I spent a solid afternoon looking and these were the first ones I finally found.
Heya, as I have just realized, I kinda just popped in here and started doing my own thing so here is a short explanation, basically I've always wanted to try editing so as I was reading this and realized that there were many more raw chapters I decided to try editing one full chapter. I have no...