Recent content by Jojojo365

The art is clear enough, with some exciting compositions and character designs that look different enough. The writing is a bit on the leisurely side — in the beginning of a story like this, I’d want to get to a hook more rapidly. This is especially true because most of chapter one is spent on...

Art is rough, but the storytelling makes sense. Even though it’s building off of established characters, it’s got passion behind it. I like it.

The art is really expressive but the story was hard to follow. One of the difficulties is that most of the backgrounds are very plain, so it’s not clear where people are. There are also a lot of characters introduced very quickly, making it difficult to keep track of who they all are. Maybe the...

Students are being attacked by an assassin from an Evil Organization, but I guess Iceman has better things to be doing? Weird. And why’s main girl staying outside the car? Surely she has a reason, but I would have appreciated a hint about it.

Great atmosphere, but the mystery aspect isn’t well done.