@duogem yeah
and also on page 4, "Mom was really serious, huh?" should be "Mom is really clumsy, isn't she?" and "This person is definitely the only one I like" should be "I guess I'm the only one who likes her/him after all"
the last page instead of why does she smell so different it should be "now that I'm conscious of her even more, I'm embarrassed of the smell of my sweat" or something