its fine mr editor-san you did a few mistakes in the translation but the thing is, you still translated it and for free. For that, u give you my thanks.
i dont know if im old or anything but between a self-entitled lucky brat and a dude that trained hard and focused for a long time, i would absolutely pick the one that got there through hard work. Also any dude that can keep himself contained and not proposed to every single hot woman he met is...
the reason his life suck is because of his own doing. Dont scratch other people's hard work like you are the god of the world. Trauma you fucking said. As if a simple sorry can return momey, time and life.