Recent content by LemonSquares

Solid work I've gotta say. Thanks for picking this up.

Damm I haven't seen a chapter this beefy before; nice change of pace compared to those 10 chap pieces

I'm liking this so far but like some peeps have said, the current chaps are way too short, especially compared to the first which was 40; the chapters have been literally decreasing in size from 40-18-17- to now just 10/11.

This is alright so far but for a supposedly calculating and smart man he gets rather enraged and emotional quite easily...Besides that, I can kinda see the "character development" but so far it's barely starting; MC hates people and is manipulative but in this latest slew it seems our MC might...

The grammar...jesus it's atrocious

Lol bronze vs gold; same color to me

Hot damm no. 10...

Praise be the Shit Loner

Spicy spice my good chum

Wow this is unbelievably bad but I guess it still has some coherence? Eh I'll read it till it loses that i suppose.

They really went and sacrificed them huh

Thank you for the good stuff

Goddamm that ending was saucy though I'm starving for more

I've gotta say the quality has definitely improved from the first ones you've done and I appreciate it

Alright this definitely feels too rushed like seriously an arc seems to end every 3 or 4 chapters with each one introducing a new setting and characters. Honestly a bit ridiculous. The forced and rushed introduction of "emotional" topics doesn't help either