Thank you for picking this lovely manga up!
A few tips:
You can make the text more visible if you use a white stroke around the texts which is in front of art and you can hide redrawn stuff lol.
The crossbar I is only used for the personal pronoun "I" and the rest should be the normal I. That...
Please stop posting any chapters. There are official chapters in English available. Please buy them and support the author instead of posting them here