@Legion_01
you said exactly what was on my mind for this chapter but better. :)
I don't mind the first time skip too much as he was a kid and having MC be an adult is nice. But to casually and easily (even if MC has already done this before) gain power sucks. I think it would have been...
@Zephian haha
your comment is great.
I was think the same thing but in less funny terms.
Also there is the question the likely hood the MC knows or thinks his bride knows martial arts. If he thinks that bride is "normal" then the old mans argument does not hold any water. His bride would than...
Where is the MC????
I know this is supposed to provide background and stuff, but why as the reader do we need to know any of this (or at least in this detail right now). Why should we care about what happened to any of the characters that just appeared? If author wants us to care they should...
Honestly this was sorta smart, crazy, but smart. Compared to his first attempt that was frankly stupid. Did not even think about the paradox but whatever. A bit weird that he is so committed to killing the dude with so much resolution. If he had that sort of resolution for becoming a hero, he...
@HiAndHello honestly that info was probably more useful than everything else combined. Like find or destroy the seal. Ernon is basically on your side now. or at the very least not part of the war. That was like the only advantage the 1st prince had. also mentioning 1st prince is puppet for duke?
I still feel like it will be Joseph, like it will seem like magician guy is it but Joseph will save the day or help her in time of need and she will eventually realize that she depends on joesph when things happen and stuff