Really good translation. Perfectly understandable. Don't mind that you didn't clean it up, most important is that it's readable without feeling like your brain is about to fart from the awful grammar.
At-least learn some basic fucking English or get someone who actually understands English to proof read it.. This is just a complete pointless waste of everyone's time to post such an awful translation..
Heck.. I can machine translate this on my phone and make it sound way better than this..
@okami6663
One theory I have is that human beings act sort of like magic devices that you can channel magic energy into. But similar to how magic devices eventually break down from use, channeling it into a human has a destructive effect.