Nice. A little typo on "costume" is fine when I can clearly see they're doing their best. The typesetting on page 6 was great! I hope the one on that page 7 from next chapter receives the same attention. When I saw that first time my reaction was "mas que p* é essa".
I find a bit strange that Tadano got entry number 1 and Komi got 2. It don't seems to be the order the characters were introduced. As Komi is in the name of the manga I think she should have got entry number 1.
Maybe the idea was put all people who might like him together, so the entry order...
― Do you love him, right? Let's confess together.
― Tadano, we love you, choose one of us.
― Sorry, Katai just confessed to me during the play, we kissed, everyone applauded and we're are lovers now.
(just… no)
Harem route: makes girls happy, Tadano don't need to choose, no conflict = kinda boring.
Yuri route: interesting, also makes both girls happy, there's a chance of Tadano suffering for being so dense.
Yaoi route: it's compatible with the yuri route: Komi × Manbagi + Tadano × Katai.
Najimi route...