Recent content by rabidvats

@LittleDaoist The page 7 image looks messed up on a non-black background. Looks like it still has an alpha channel that needs to be deleted.

@Pekwa p.38, panel 3: "What we can do is take the plunge and lunch a frontal assault." Should be "launch".

@BraveDude8 Shouldn't the website be sending a "Cache-Control: private, s-max-age=0" HTTP header on any HTML pages customized for the user to prevent this kind of thing in the first place? DDG (or any web cache) is supposed to honor that and not cache such per-user resources. I checked...

Kirishima sans tits? Why would we want to look at Kirishima sans tits? This is why the apostrophe matters.

For anyone confused by the first page: The upper halves of the panels, where Yamada is scrubbing his back, are just what he is imagining. He calms down once he mentally pastes his sister's face over Yamada's.

@Excorsism p.3, second to last panel: "Yep, of course." should be "Nope, of course not." Otherwise, she's saying she does mind.

@FlamerScan Page 4, panel 2, first speech bubble: Should be "stature", not "statue".

@monka188 p. 8 panel 2: "Haagen Dazs" should be "Haagen-Bazs" to match p. 12 panel 2.

That was an epic diss on both her boyfriend (probably unintentionally) and herself. I'd be impressed if it wasn't so sad.

Make it so that obnoxious person who was blocked knows who they can go after for blocking them? No thanks. Also, who anyone chooses to block is their private information, so broadcasting that to others is a violation of privacy. -1

@apathist You switch between the spellings "Arirai" and "Alilai" on pages 2 and 3. Best if you pick one. p.3: "He's getting more and more human, and someday he's gonna have to take his ears off." This makes no sense in context. I didn't check the raws, but I think she's referring to herself...

The credits page gave me the cancer that the rest of the chapter cured.

I don't know why everyone is calling this a "love triangle" when it is clearly not. Long-haired girl even said it wasn't on page 9. I don't know if it will turn into one, but just the fact that they have an honest 3-way relationship makes it less likely just by showing that the writer is aware...

Pretty sure "dummy" essentially calls someone an idiot, too, especially paired with her expression. A rougher font choice could also harden her response. Besides, that way you'd at least be preserving thrust of the joke.

@Maiorem How about "Daddy"/"Dummy"? It's about as close as "Papa"/"Baka".