So this is a super hero/white knight manga now, everybody has a power that the MC can see from a towering castle to a magnum I wonder if we're gonna get the same cliches and arcs that come with the genre, we already have the villain, the fair maiden who needs saving, a rival who's gonna need...
I wouldn't usually complain about a manga cause they take a lot of effort to make especially with how often they have to pump the chapters out... but when your using the Naruto universe there's gonna be an expectation for a certain quality in the story, dialogue and drawing. Like what happened...
This chapter has alot of things pulling me out of it, like first is the art alot of the pages look half finished. Then there's the villain as well as her having a lackluster personality her design looks boring as, and then your telling me naruto just stood there like an idiot while his kids were...