Great job!
The only line that sound off to me is the butcher one "Bro, your commissions always are a blast to work on, dont be shy"
"Bro, your commissions are always a blast to work on, don't be shy" sound better, but I'm not native, so I may be wrong.
I'll never understand why France is always the first nation to be named when talking about cheese when Italy have more variety, just looking the list of italian and french cheese in wikipedia there is a huge difference between the two