@GoggledAnon I re-read both to compare. They had some more polished phrases as well compared to yours, but nothing to warrant being thrown into a fit of rage over translation by a long shot. The difference between the two translations is so very minute
I'm going to go out on a limb and hope that she's just going to end up as good friends as Tadokoro. I don't think there's going to be any love drama with Rui, but you never know.