I'm used to seeing better quality from Squiggles. Some of that stuff was just painful to read, like the repeated "figth". Thanks though, and I for one won't complain if you take a little longer to release more chapters to proofread them and get them to your usual standards.
Worldbuilding isn't great, gonna have to explain stuff like how eating is handled if seeing a mouth is forbidden. Also, why are there still public water fountains?
Looks like the same guy's work, but with some changes to try to make it easier to read. It's a bit better but honestly most of the problem is the source seems to jump around too much so there's only so much a person can do just translating. My only issue is with the editor that thought the raw...