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The end~ @SutekiSenpai It was a copy of himself, he even sort of knew this, see chapter 1.

Good enough to be rather vanilla, I'd say that it almost turned harem but remained a simple romance story and family building ending. A bit sad that it ends with one volume. I'd give art at 9.2/10 and 7.6/10 for the story.

F-ing ridiculous but explains a lot...

This was my favorite part of the book!

An interesting read worth my time, all be it only for a short amount.

Damn... is that vore?

OK thought corner. It took a while for her status to come online, like the mobile and semi-self aware stage of growth like a synchronization issue. She was a normal baby then bam, her status is online. It could also be because there is a sudden dead end event that spurred the status activation...

I mean she got her 'game data' is her race human or elf?

ore like if it is too awful then redraw, this chapter looked much better than a lot I have seen in actual print.

Blatantly skips over the graduation scene, the marriage part, the news paper part, the thrilled parents (I mean the Mom was a main character right?), the number of kids they had (for the math yo~), the creation of the church (because a lot of people can now see her), and Rei's library/harem...

this is also 29.2 FIX IT

When it ends like that and switches to a shooting star I feel that Gods throw rocks.

This is such a great story. How the platitudes are lightly touched and how the realism of life shines through every page making for a very well done fantasy.

"Is this normal?" -He broke the elf~~~

THX ACE!