Recent content by Venalitor

Winced every time they showed Shasro attacking. He would destroy himself.

What, is that dragon supposed to be a threat? It's just a reanimated skeleton. The actual dragon that was killed by the cat is standing right in front of him too. . . This is just a joke.

Looks more like a demon horde than goblin tribe now.

Damn. I was sure it would be the little lady knight that would have helped him pick the gift.

She's dressed pretty normal for winter though?

Just gotta say. . . That truck didn't hit anything. I mean, it's stopped in front of where she pushed the kid. It looks more like she fell and hit her head and the driver is knocking his forehead into the steering wheel in disbelief while the kid cries of skinned knees or something.

p21-22 - An elf, a dragonoid, and an 'elemental cat'. . . Where does the human bit come from?

What, so now the Light Spirit King's blessing has no outward signifiers to clue the reader or other characters of the novel in? Fail!

Yeah. She does look hella weird now. Gonna take some getting used to.

They were pretty dumb to assume all spells are destructive to begin with.

Is there an Eco in here?

P10 - Sex appeal? What's that to do with anything?

If not for the preservation magic whoever had to clean that overbuilt claptrap would absolutely hate her. To bad she doesn't know how to make an actual pump which would be a lot less bulky. The poor trees.

Huh. I thought the previous serialization was pretty neatly tied off.

It's kinda ludicrous that they don't know what an abacus is. A device independently invented across the world. I mean, it originated in mesopotamia, but even the america's had it. Just seems like bad writing.