Why put the story in a situation where the readers have to suspend their disbelief (suddenly he's cancelled on twitter for obvious self defense with plenty of witnesses) when you don't have to? Like just write the previous chapter to have MC more aggressively defend her and make the self...
How many times is this girl gonna get saved from the brink of death/rape/mutilation? I think this is gonna be the 4th time in 8, coming up on 9, chapters now.
This is a BAD relationship lmao. I get the author is trying to create a narrative that explores relationship problems but he should've done it with multiple couples each having their own issues. Instead we have 1 relationship that has gone through
- A misunderstood proposal that was never...
Well that was dumb. Was he supposed to look heroic there lol? Why would an artist write his MC to be so late to save the day in such a throwaway situation? Makes him look fucking useless.