Ohoh. Crazy stalker yuri girl actually wants the best for her latest target. (If she's being duped into marrying into power and wealth, that might actually be a win, so maybe she should help out instead.)
@vvinchan - most of it seems to be ok for my crude eyes.
Only things that make me want to suggest changes are around page 9
This navel's waist -> This bare midriff (This bare belly)
Then the strip in this section -> And this absolute area OR And this open area OR And then these bare thighs...
@SuperOniichan I agree that NTR these days is just about anything you can slap the label on for any reason. But if you go out of your way to call it "classic NTR" then it should be the classic use, as a motivation for the protagonist to keep moving forward into a new dramatic arc.
Buuut...
@SuperOniichan Doesn't 'classic' NTR demand that there be a MC that's being NTR:d? Since we're completely uninvested in the husband, it's not a story-driving thing, just a fetish?
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Anyway, I came in mainly to say "She's probably not suffocated him, since we got told that the story was...
@PiaPoi That's how it is to rely on the kindness of strangers. Scanlation team Jankenpon seems to have gone under and disappeared in 2008. There should be a chapter 37 made by them as well, but for the rest you'd have to find the raws and possibly a translator/typesetter etc...
U Satan Möbius Destruction Wave!! XD
@Nums - Normally nothing, but it's not like he had any candlesticks or anything else either. So probably the intent was to imply that he was going to use it to S/M play (dripping hot wax on people).
(Note that you should use specialy candles for such things...
@Amatsukaze_KaiNi I didn't think the train would be so massive based upon the picture of the station building at the start. The tracks coming in from the sides enter buildings that are at most 15 m high, and the train looks like it's at least 45 m high.. "It's bigger on the inside" I guess..
@DeadintheWater I agree with @SveNo though, she does keep to safe spots. She considered naked, but decided on a bunny suit. She's posed in private for nude art where the art was displayed in public. She's been naked out in the forest where very few were around (and she only came out in front of...