This is... honestly a really lame way to do something as great and grandiose as SCP-001. I think a series of chapters, maybe 5-10, with each one being a popular proposal, would’ve been a lot better. The two samples are so, so boiled down they lose all luster and honestly neither are ones I...
How does this guild lady know about the dragon? The whole point was he didn’t do it publicly and the guild was confused.
Also why the heck does that butcher have 2000 kilos of super expensive meat humans don’t even like? Your worldbuilding continues to not make sense, author.
But even if he didn’t speak a word of it she should’ve been able to read it from his mind. The whole point is she’s a mind reader.
And no, I’m still not going to pity your horribly evil character no matter what you put in this stupid arc, author. Leave Sade in the ground where she belongs.
I feel like Kaguya’s ideal self should be someone who can be totally free. Gets the same goal without sounding totally fucking insane.
Like, seriously, is aka setting up a heel turn?
Wait, mr. philosophers stone engine can only survive 3 days okay without food and water? Lol what?
...and I guess the Shutina/Canaan plotline is just randomly put on hold?
You know, it’s not the goddamned 1950s. You’d really think we’d be past the shitty analogy of “Men looking at women is like a starving animal looking at a slab of meat” by now.
Eh... this seems like a backstory added after the character was initially introduced. Having so much worldly travels and experience doesn’t match up with Diablo’s constant naivety.