I second what Kneel said, a proofreader could do much to further improof your translation.
But honestly I'm glad that someone picked up this series again, so thank you!
@Tairo most likely new Uploaders block, so that a persons first upload needs to be checked by mods first.
I guess the chapter will reappear in a few hours
@Kaarme
But as it seems like her fief is the only one undergoing this radical shift in developement, meaning that there are mpst likely no higher quality goods, that the other fiefs are exporting. Also the other fief is more or less next to the capital and has no need to cross her territory...
I don't know if its an unpopular opinion, but I feel like, at least for me, redrawing isn't really necessary. I can live just fine with it being like in the raws and just have little TL notes on the sides of the Frames that translate what would be redrawn
Tbh with the NPCs being portrayed as alive caracters it feels like the author should have just went with an fantasy world/Isekai setting...
Why should npc be able to blush or act in ways that make the developers confused? The guys at the company seem like they are observing a distant fantasy...