@grimthoughts Not really a fair comparison. While the hentai you describe is criminal it's not going to get a bad rating simply due to how offensive it is. We have huge film series that are literally nothing but gore porn like saw and other trash. Reality sucks. This has a poor rating because...
So... I read the first chapter... This might be the worst thing I've ever read. The story doesn't have logical flow, it honestly reminds me of a story my nephew made up drew on like 20-30 sheets of paper and read to me once when he was 6.
I'm not trying to exaggerate or just trash on it with...
They call him 3 different names in this that he has never been called in any of the other chapters. Vell, Veldilin and Vendilin. Other names sounded kinda weird too.