@nikutameruraput
Found your critique insightful but i've learned those who use virgin as an insult tend to have a desert for a sex life. I just wanted to point that out.
@Orangechrisy
You are right on every point. I just want to add that Twitter should never be taken seriously for any matter as that cesspool just makes it hard for any real progress to get anywhere.
@DeGrasse
Finding a fantasy story that tells it's story in that way is very rare. You are better off trying to find something in that way of storytelling that is not an isekai. You won't get that from an isekai because it doesn't work for people who typically read isekai. If this was in a WW1...
@DeGrasse
It sounds like you want a gritty isekai with guns as the object of weaponry. The issue with that is from my experience gun based story combat doesn't sell too well unless it is in a more futuristic setting. People find the battles on horseback with swords more interesting than early...
@BlackLeopard I pretty much decided to drop this. I gave the latest chapter a try but I am sure that even with his teacher who knows about his ability telling him that she is not under charm that he will still say she is. The author is pretty much just telling the same story again after his last...
The sad thing is that I have read a few works from this author. Didn't realize it was him as this was pretty tame compared to his other works. Guess he felt the need to add some elements from his other things. You would think deadtube alone is enough rape but over half of his works use it quite...
I like the story so far but it would be really stupid to hide his identity from someone he actually traveled with 400 years ago. If it was a descendant that is one thing but it is the same exact person that can easily help you learn about the magic of the current era. Hiding it serves no purpose...
@Argo050
I know any "fan" that wouldn't watch a streamer because they find out they had an actual real life is no fan at all. That's just someone one step away from being some creepy ass stalker to me.
@Zenbonzakura
My opinion is no one can be blamed here but the author. You wrote it and didn't confirm it as a joke until later. Can't get mad that the audience reacts in such a way especially with an NTR joke. Write something bad then accept the bad response it gets.
edited: I think the...