The writing is really awkward. A lot of things don't make sense.
One of the examples would be the library scene. This was such a cringy "and everyone clapped, and his name was Albert Einstein" shit.
Characters are all very surface level and the author doesn't really sell them.
Does the author think that homeless people are mindless zombies? So she gets a redo, but she has no accumulated experience from the first time, only surface level trauma. All she does is whine and self-refelect about how she was a bad person... Meh.
And the silver plan so far is just aimless...