@XionXD
Yeah. Having months in between backstory / flashback chapters, just leaves you wondering what the fuck is happening.
Each chapter would need to be more self contained in order to wait so long between each chapter. That's how Berserk is managing to pull it off.
I don't know about this one. I'm usually alright with OP protag fantasy trash, but the MC's goal seems pretty pointless.
If you can't use holy magic, you're not a paladin. There are more sensible ways to improve his reputation.
What is this heartbeat nonsense...
I wear a smart watch all the time and mine is 55-60 outside of exercise.
Athletes can have resting heart rates in the 40s...
If you look at Wikipedia, its says resting heart rates above 80 is unhealthy territory.