@tnt261 it’s basically a gang turf war and people are mad because a small unknown gang just jumped in and took the turf right under the noses of the gang that supposedly was running the show here.
Okay so we hate Yasuda, that’s established. Can we also agree that every fucking other character that plays a a major role is annoying to some capacity? Except for Numa, he’s cool, and Miyako’s chill... sometimes.
I love the concept however I do hope that the string ties their fated partners to who they belong to instead of having the MC beat fate. And I can only imagine how awkward it must be to find out that the one you’ve fallen in love with and their and your own fated partner are sitting at a table...
you definitely need a typesetter and a qc/pr, this is widely considered as unreadable.
and none of that vertical text rotation. Nobody likes or wants to read that.
I’m gonna assume he isn’t erect because he’s not stimulated. It’s happening far too fast to create a mood, thus his brother and her mother come to help them.