Anybody else have stories of incompetent newbies? At one place we had a guy who would just stand around and spit shells on the ground where ever he was.
How long was that time skip? At the beginning of the chapter it said it took six months to get the mana level of a new sorcerer, so how long did he train after that to learn explosion?
I'm not really sure where to start. The spelling was pretty good. I didn't really notice any words that were mixed up. But the grammar and syntax were horrible. Many of the speech bubbles weren't understandable sentences. I know that in Japanese and other languages the subject of a sentence is...
Are those kids really human? If it has been five years then it makes no sense for them to have been there. Nobody would go into that danger zone, let alone take their kids.