Thank you for the effort. The translation is much better, although I can tell that English isn't your first language due to a few errors and some odd phrasing. For example, on page 5, it should be "Did you just call me a pain in the ass?", because the Simple Present form of the verb is used with...
lol, so the local dragon bishop made-up a bunk quest to have food march into his dragon's mouth by itself? But wait, didn't that way of killing people exclude the possibility of soul drain? Something about them having to die through non directly connected human or monster violence?
@Valve
No, you see, if the lord was the one financially depending on the guild, the guild would have had a financial lever to influence the lord to action, not the other way around.
Regardless, the lord can't pressure them trough their financial dependency, it can only be a bluff. The lord...
I think there's a mix-up on page 19. It says "the lord considers the guild a large source of income", but contextually, it's probably the other way around, with the lord being a frequent client of the guild and hence a major source of income.
There are also some minor problems with the text in...
"Jeeves, who is this insane violent woman in my bed?"
"Your wife, sir"
"Explain."
"You see, sir, the sane and docile type doesn't really go for wolf dick."
"You can just make more children after all".
"And this is a 1-hit sure kill fighting spirit fencing arts* technique from the East."
"Evil god rending fencing arts* ultimate technique." (*also in both cases not sure if "arts" is necessary, or whether it should be "art", "martial art" or simply...
It's not Yuri's fault that he needs to charge so much. The thing is that like all Russians, he needs to have at least 40% of his blood to consist of alcohol to survive, and because he's an SSS-rank hunter, only the terribly expensive SSS-rank alcohol qualifies for the job.
@Solipsist
What do you mean by "we do not have a boring reality"? That's exactly what we have so far, from both our and his perspective. He's stuck doing part-time jobs which are just cutting parts out of dead things in a crappy damp cave tunnel. I'm not saying that I'm sure, but the draw of the...
@KingLich
My guess is that she's probably some sort of offensive magic device user? Whether something else is called a "gun" in that world or if that was the closest translation that would make sense, I don't know.