When Tine says "Archer is one thing" and then refers to Rider, you wrote Archer the first time. There's quite a few other typos, so you should proofread the chapter again.
Also RIP True Rider, she's gonna get bench pressed instead of mating pressed.
Damn, that was a spicy finish.
For a moment I thought that cigarette to the eye made an illusion or something, but nah it's just gonna take a miracle for our guy to regain his humanity. I guess his partner uses his juicebox for him once these bad guys die?
So Darius displaced God and killed everyone.
Time for Tanaka to leap through time?
Pg 7: Should be 'sought' instead of 'seeked' in Angelica's dialogue.
Interesting, the manga differs from the LN when Jeanne says without Command Spells one loses their right as a Master. Meanwhile in Case Files, Heartless makes his summoning of Faker as convoluted as it is because Waver still has his Master rights from the 4th Holy Grail War. Then you have Rin...