Comparing the two side by side, it's really interesting to see something so heavily redrawn.
I understand giving the MC a little more personality than before, but stuff like changing the girl's expression on the bottom of page 11 is pretty hard for me to call an upgrade.
Yeah famous last words and all, I don't see the gaijin/fujo couple going anywhere much more dirty. As long as the bullying keeps going, though, I'll follow them to the bitter end.
@Ou_Ki I qc a lot, so it's kind of a hard switch to turn off. And I actually have something in one of my own chapters to go fix still, so I feel your pain.
I don't know how you did it, but I usually just lasso the top part and make a new layer on top it the text.
@Hallstein Nope. thank @dakka again for that. He went hard this chapter.
A couple other notes, the original is くそ, kuso, basically the only 'swear' word in japanese.
And, where chips is is actually "Nori flavor". Couldn't really put that in and have it make sense, though.