p.4.a why is it so cold? / why does it feel so cold?
only use "bad" when there are no other choices like: ominous, oppressing, suffocating feeling
b what the heck
p.6 it's bright red / what a deep red (red isn't really quantifiable). "so much blood", if it fits
not an expert but...
What am I even reading? 😄 Requesting 'pure love' and 'platonic relationship' tags.
FYI: you still have 0% chances to score with your lesbian crush, even if yours is short, soft and cute.
I'll never look at a bobcut the same way again...
Awful omake, ruins the ending.
Peeps, don't listen to any "friendly" advice. Whatever the addiction, the 1st step is deciding to quit yourself.
Anyone pretending otherwise is after your money, and/or encouraging people to be as weak-willed as they are.
Smoke or quit, choose one yourself, don't...
Kickass ending. Congrats author-san and ty CClaw.
PS, as for RL: electronic cigs are commercial sh*t and light cigs suck. Smoke heavy or don't smoke at all.
Oh yeah, and there are patches to build up your guilt faster, and drill a bigger hole in your wallet, if you're that kind of smoker.