reaching critical mass of plot twists. only so many "haha gotcha" moments you can stuff in a row before it goes to shit, to subvert a plot it needs to be present first.
ok, im throwing in the towel. when shit gets so bad i have to just scroll over it without skim-reading its time to quit. bit of a shame since ive been reading since ch1 but oh well, i just hope in a couple of years ill forget that farmland and onwards ever happened and will only remember the...
@Neji_Hyuga_II my lad, you need to read more. preferably something that is not complete dogshit. then, after acquiring even basic knowledge of genre cliches you can come back to this, read it and facepalm.
@Trov or cliches are what every dumb fuck can think of first, hence why they are so prevalent and good writers actually form them or at the very least acknowledge and subvert them.