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THe way i see it, the 2 most likely outcomes is, he becomes a really hawt one-san-type that drips seduction and will try and seduce the MC (but fail, because he looks like a woman but the MC's libido detects something is not right with "her" and hes not attracted to...
umm.... This is a Sci-fi space adventure story... I dont think its hard to believe the MC "came from another world" there must be multiple planets in this right? lol
I think a different dimension, universe or parallel reality is what should be used for this. MULTIVERSE THEORY!
No one is going to comment on what is the most obvious sin of this chapter?
What restaurant puts all of the orders of everyone at one table on a single dish? There shoulda been 3 separate plates!
im sorry... but men have long hair too... how exactly is undoing her hair bun revealing her to be a woman? all the men in this have buns too, so they all need long hair also to have a bun
well that was really uncomfortable.... I really wish the femaale Orcs had some kind of distinguishing feature. one les angle on the horns, slightly differnt color horn, even take the cliche bow on the head...or how about alittle hair?
You know its weird... I woulda called these guys Ogres. i think this is the first time ive seen Orcs with horns.
beyond that... I would really like one even if obscure distinguishing feaature between the men and women. Like inner outter belly buttons or sumthing...
I guess Orcs dont breast...
MC failed at the school for looking away from exploding things.... your back is suppose to be facing the exploding bits and you are suppose to be walking away from it towards the gurl...