This translation catches a lot of things the other one missed (she was taken in half a year ago, the blessing is effective against their race (gibberish in the other one), she doesn't want the MC to go to another country, etc.) but the writing is a little stiff. If the two groups teamed up this...
Might be the most uninspired, talentless isekai manga ever. It's like they have a checklist of tropes and are just doing each one with as little effort as possible.
It's not the worst, but even bad ideas are more entertaining than no ideas.
Next he gets a female companion, next the newbie bullying scene, next the slime is good at finding things, next next next no time for the characters to react or think or have any motivation for their actions, just keep checking off those isekai tropes
So, you've just spent a bunch of money to fix a random girl's problems purely out of compassion. The girl is now worried that she's useless and can only think of one way to pay you back, which wasn't even her own idea. She is shivering. Do you:
A. Give her a job as a crew member on your...
Calling it now, the cliffhanger tension is a ruse, backroom is the cool club for badasses or something and the "competition" is something silly. Makes no sense otherwise.
The combined mindset of "this is a game, everything is predetermined" and "I'm the main character, the most important person in the world" could definitely make a lot of people not even consider the feelings of the "characters" or the consequences of their actions and just focus on "winning" and...
This is starting to feel like some kind of mystery game, with the clues and disguise missions and a ghostly advisor that no one but the player can see.
About time we got an otome isekai MC with RPG isekai cheat abuse. Magical violence solves everything!
I just wonder if the world will survive the battle between her and the evil heroine. Wouldn't be surprised if gods or demons get dragged into it, this is gonna get ugly.
I'm hoping this is just awkward translation and he's actually worried about workplace injuries, rather than having intrusive thoughts about punching babies.