Christ, that red braid is almost as bad as the shitty CGI they think they're actually getting away with but is actually so bad people hate it even when they think they don't. Add to it the general linework around the effects and the anatomy and this is basically just a high schooler's art...
Wait, isn't that lady the angel with the powers of a humanoid fucking calamity? Why's she getting captured? What's even the point of putting LitRPG elements if you're going to throw them away for what amounts to a half-chapter dedicated to a mix between half-cocked fanservice and an utterly...
I mean, if my little sister's body was being used as a slave by some dude I never met I'd probably go about things in a drastic and far less rational manner, so... Isn't this guy a good person compared to the MC?
Bad enough that an obviously blood-drenched plot has been neutered by the worst type of censorship, but if you pay attention to how nonsensically the heads sit on the necks of each character it becomes fully unreadable.