I really wish that the author doesn't "skip" time like how in this chapter uses 2 days ago and from last night..
It just doesn't give off the same vibes as the croc where you just get the croc's most memorable thing that happened on the day..
I like the idea of the duality that the author is trying to put but the execution is very very far from good, I would prefer having some kind of mastermind villain who planned the zombie to happen rather than this edgy dude who just hates shit
All I can say is Oof
Though, I think the numbers aren't correct especially going in elementary, you know how much kids lie just to prove how cooler/better something is..
But if the counting started from a set time or when it appeared then that would be the case for low numbers