@alidan that would make sense if the awkwardness came from world building. This wasn’t really world building, just conversations that didn’t feel natural with reactions that were also unnatural.
The conversations felt super awkward and forced.
“I’m not a traitor!”
“Uh ok”
“Here let me explain her (unreasonable) outburst“
“Hmm sounds reasonable”
“Hey bit random but here are some belongings to random dead people I saw. Not sure if the readers even remember that incredibly insignificant...
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so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus:
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