as Loli Mamoritai's page specifically asks for constructive criticism i'll say now this series is in desperate need of a decent proofreader. since nobody has stepped up after 34 chapters i'll helpfully lay out my issues with and recommendations for this chapter:
to the translator: if you are...
i got crunchyroll premium specifically to read their manga & i wouldn't recommend it to anyone. the web reader is almost unusable & the mobile app actually is unusable.
@stef yo just wanted to thank you for your hard work, i just realized im reading all the series you're translating so shouts out to your impeccable taste
@moderateTrouble the scanlator for this series is notorious for last chapter sniping, so i assume they're trying to increase profile views or page views for some reason.
if a series is set as hentai that means you have to go through the process of changing your account settings to be able to...
not to pile onto this but yeah, it's the definition of bland cliche isekai.
i see this tier of manga as literary fast food - of no real "nutritional" value but it's cheap & easy and you dont really have to think about it
@Plykiya this is a prime example of what i mean! unless there's non-english grammar rules im oblivious to i wouldn't think that there's any reason for Stand to be either bracketed, quoted, or in parenthesis. is it a stylistic choice?
@421cookies i figured it would be something like that. are there particular cases where it would or would not be used? i seem to see it thrown in liberally in places where it makes no sense to be used, here for example:
in this context i wouldn't think that either Being Praised or School...