this shiho girl is so annoying LMAO
im enjoying the conflict she's bringing though. it feels a lot more fresh than the "misunderstanding. reconcile. misunderstanding. reconcile" loop that a lot of other mangas like to do (looking at you kase-san)
I feel like it was more of a she doesn't want Nanoha to be popular rather than she's worried about Nanoha cheating on her or something. Y'know how there's romance tropes where the guy is too popular so it's difficult to get time alone, dealing with stalkers/people with jealous crushes, etc. Kind...
It's grammatically correct, but I think that maybe the bubble size is throwing you off? It took me a few tries to get it too. I'll see what I can do to make it easier to read
Lolol for all you guys who didn't get it-
She's surprised the guys accepted her fruit, and the title is simply just formatting (If you look in earlier chapters, they all began with some form of the word "Corruption")