@Brutu Yeah of course but that conversation is about writing technique and is out of topic of what I was trying to say: absurdly slow pacing.
@EtanRed I'm aware but I'm judging the manga independent of the source material. Restructuring the introduction like this is messy and this chapter...
WAIT A MINUTE THIS IS THE HOODIE GIRL I'VE BEEN SEEING EVERYWHERE
Edit: wth I've never seen ratings spread out that evenly across all points like that but especially the 1s what's with the intense 1/10 ratings?
@FudgePucker
You're telling me that this manga introduces a new main character almost 50 chapters after it started?! The first chapter came out almost 5 years ago, there's no excuse for this frustratingly slow pacing.
I highly disagree with chikikuto, this manga is extremely promising with its amazingly strong start. Tho I do agree in that it depends on how it will develop but there's no way it can be clichéd with this unique of a setup.
@youdontknowwho I mean, so it wouldn't make sense for there to not be...
Should've made the necromancer retaliate or something. Missed opportunity for tension. Don't let him meet up with the party again, delay that story beat much, much later so there's more tension and bigger pay off like Arifureta.
Very fun spin on the monster girl trope. Art is nice and setting makes a good addition to the hentai. Highly recommended and hope there'll be more chapters
Yo I read this on nhentai it's amazing.
I don't like the last chapter tho. All the chapters so far were inventive and the characters were memorable in at least one way but that last one was just the cookie-cutter loli plotline. Everything before it was so creative and the last chapter that you...