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this series is starting to feel like its dragging. barely anything has actually happened in the last several years real time. Qins took a couple zhao cities... and thats it. Riboku is squabbling with current leadership, but despite some action the last couple chapters, it ultimately didnt...

so many things i forgot existed so many things dropped by LH

nice wrap up to the arc w/ segue into next one. neph's history had to become the focus at some point or another

yay symbolism

well he's got a general and sub-commanders now, the ranks are filling in nicely. what is he missing at this point? spy master maybe? -general military is decent for now, more could join tho. -one-(wo)man-armies he already has 1 actual and 2 in training (chloe is probably close already tho)...

entertaining tho it might be, if Jared had time to grab him, he had time to stab him

its been quite awhile on this one, had to reread a bit

hmmm im wondering if they are going to fix the names, or just roll with these going forward. in the novel version i read, the one sent to try to kill the mythic beast was called "Saber God", whereas "Sword God" is the one in charge and giving the orders saber and sword have pretty similar...

well. ive reached the unfollow point. prob should have done so earlier. best of luck to everyone

oh geez... i think it was page 9 where this weird idea popped into my head: "somehow this feels like an open-ended final chapter" and that notion got far stronger on page 14 :/ one of the few time my intuition is right and its a big negative :( Edit: also, normally i do like more...

umm shoot into its mouth? its a big af target edit: haha @kenkagejack posted almost exact same comment at almost same time

@Zergio200ism me being a little shit at one point in my life does not mean I want to read about one...

anyone know if the novel of this is translate somewhere? (im not finding it on novelupdates, maybe it goes be a different name?)

@zz2000 Thanks for the heads up!

i liked the original premise of this story, but i feel like the pace is abhorrently slow. 2 real life months of absolutely nothing happening

@metincan3606 that face looks a bit too feminine for a 'john' imho

this should have a smut tag.

@babydragon agree, and thats hardly the only such scene that has been cut sadly 🙁

@kaarme @storm_crow I do really hope the two of you are right, but even then, it would just seem like mediocre writing rather than terrible.

...well that was disappointingly cliche... the door was just left open? really?