Considering this series is all about big brain plays, that "gap" they spotted is definitely a trap.
The "I wish your general was dumb enough" on page 6 sounds kind of weird and feels like it doesn't make much sense there. What was the original Japanese?
Page 12: "which ones are the most sort after"
And suddenly, it immediately became clear that you have a British accent. (Should be spelled "sought")
Anyway, thanks for the chapter, the translation was good!
Edit: A few other minor spelling corrections/typos if you feel up to fixing them:
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This translation frequently makes no sense and uses obviously incorrect pronouns (calling Olivia "him" or Brad "her" for instance). Was it machine translated with no time spent on trying to figure out what was actually being said or editing it so the lines actually make sense in context?
@karoto94 I'm just thinking like in the case of a game, but losing aggro when you're fighting solo would be pretty annoying since you'd have to be constantly chasing the enemies. Maybe something like that.
I really don't think "the way to wipe your butt is something you teach children" needed to be a TL note. I'm pretty sure that's a universal thing in all cultures. At least, I hope it is.
Anyway, I love how the author subverted the "discrimination against dark elves" trope by introducing...
Just as I was worried Kadokura was dead, the author reminds us that he simultaneously has the worst and best luck in the world in the most glorious way possible. Also, I love that the chopsticks ended up being a perfect Chekhov's Gun.